What I’ve Acheived: 2/19/08
From all the time I spent on directing my own way for my project, now I am actually at the point where I can take a step forward. I am pretty sure that I am ready for it to present to people and continue marching forward.
2/19, I started watching the video on Grand Theft Auto: Vice City by Dave Chappelle, so that I can catch and offer my thoughts to even the smallest parts of the video. The reason for that is because I am thinking Chappelle has put far more things than I can actually imagine, since he never used any specific verbal expressions (which is one of the most fascinating factors that makes this review attractive).
Today I took notes on the factors used in the review. Just to make it easier and clearer for me! So now I have a basic chart of comparison and contrast that will format my actual product.
Even though it will be almost impossible to affect my product of the week, but I will be updating twitter constantly, so that I can get some wider views on my topic (hopefully). After the product, networking it is.
February 19th, 2008 at 3:18 pm
Keep going, Paul.
For the record: When you write,
–I think you miss an opportunity to be interesting and “deeper.” (And by that I don’t mean “boring” or “serious.”)
What I mean is this: You could simply share those “factors” and that “chart,” so we could possibly see your thinking and both learn from it, and add our thoughts to it.
Wanna share that? A post about “Why Dave Chapelle Amazes Me” or whatever, in which you really do get specific about the things you notice, would simply be interesting, done with enough voice and clarity.
This is not an assignment. It’s just feedback.